4th Reflection

Well.... let's sharing about our reflection for the last meeting in writing course.

in the last meeting.. as usual my friends and I had a small discussion about the other types of paragraphs. and in that meeting, there were 6 presenters, they were Riza, Via, Aini, Dini, Mega and Nisa. From their presentation, I could get some summaries:
1. at Riza's Presentation: she presented about "Contrast and Compare Paragraph". And her text was a Contrast Paragraph. From her presentation, I could take a conclusion that if a Compare Paragraph tells about the similarity of two objects or more, and a Contrast Paragraph tells about the differences of two objects.
2. at Via's Presentation: she provided a paragraph and assumed that it was an argumentative paragraph. How could she thought that it was an argumentative paragraph???? because the text which she provided told about the  writer's opinion. unfortunately,even if the paragraph told about the writer's opinion but in that case, there was no clear state from the writer. whether the writer disagree or agree with the topic
3. at Aini's presentaion: she presented two paragraphs. those were cause and effect paragraph and definition. she presented to us clearly and the paragraph that she provided was a good paragraph.
4. at Dini's presentation: the paragraph she presented was about proses analysis. it was a good paragraph too.
and for two presenters (Mega and Nisa),,, they had a good paragraph and the presented smoothly. :)

OK... I think that's all from me...
bye Guys,,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

3th Reflection

Hi.. Hi.. Hi..

Best Regard for you all guys… Nice to meet you again in my simple blog ..

Ok,,, for the last meeting in My Writing I course, My friends and I had discussed about the other types of Paragraph with Miss Vita, absolutely. And from that meeting, I could take some points.

• On the 11^th of September, my friends and I had assignment to make a Narrative paragraph. And we had to work in pair for analysing the paragraph that we had made.  Each group consisted of 2 people, and Alfiatun or Fia was my group.I read Fia’s paragraph, I thought it was very good paragraph. And When I looked at Fia read my paragraph, I was very shy and worried whether my own paragraph was a narrative paragraph or not? Did my paragraph have good plot and 4 basics of good narrative paragraph or not?? Hufft… I was very afraid of it. But, I was little happy because Fia commented on my paragraph that It was a good paragraph. It made my worried less than before.

• On the 14^th of September, there were 4 persons who come in front of the class for presenting their paragraph. The situation at the time was very enjoyable and the interesting discussion happened. 

• The first person who presented was putri. In putri’s presentation, she explained about Compare and Proses analysis paragraph. She gave us information about it clearly. But, as Miss Vita said, when we had a proses analysis paragraph it should be written in the form of paragraph
• The second person was Yogi. He presented his paragraph well. Yeah, it because he was very confidence and had a sense of humor, so he could make the atmosphere in our class become  an exciting class. But, when he presented his paragraph, he told my friend and I that his paragraph was a descriptive paragraph. However, when we read his paragraph, it did not like a descriptive paragraph, it had many main idea. And after we asked to him about the paragraph that he had, we knew that he had modified his paragraph so that when we wanted to analyse it, we were very confused.  Hem,, yogi was a funny boy with confidence 100%
• The third was Nita. From Nita’s presentation, I could take a conclusion that an Illustration Paragraph gave detail information but it was not clear as like in Descriptive paragraph which was clearer and gave us detail information about the topic.
• the topic sentence  from the first sentence. and the topic sentence was not always taken from the hole of the first sentence in the paragraph. We can make it by ourselves, but the contents or the sentence still related to the main idea of the paragraph

Ok.. I think that all from me…

Hopefully we can get the best from our effort.. :)