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Ok,,, for the last meeting in My Writing I course, My
friends and I had discussed about the other types of Paragraph with Miss Vita,
absolutely. And from that meeting, I could take some points.
- On the 11th of September, my friends and I had assignment to make a Narrative paragraph. And we had to work in pair for analysing the paragraph that we had made. Each group consisted of 2 people, and Alfiatun or Fia was my group.I read Fia’s paragraph, I thought it was very good paragraph. And When I looked at Fia read my paragraph, I was very shy and worried whether my own paragraph was a narrative paragraph or not? Did my paragraph have good plot and 4 basics of good narrative paragraph or not?? Hufft… I was very afraid of it. But, I was little happy because Fia commented on my paragraph that It was a good paragraph. It made my worried less than before.
- On the 14th of September, there were 4 persons who come in front of the class for presenting their paragraph. The situation at the time was very enjoyable and the interesting discussion happened.
- The first person who presented was putri. In putri’s presentation, she explained about Compare and Proses analysis paragraph. She gave us information about it clearly. But, as Miss Vita said, when we had a proses analysis paragraph it should be written in the form of paragraph
- The second person was Yogi. He presented his paragraph well. Yeah, it because he was very confidence and had a sense of humor, so he could make the atmosphere in our class become an exciting class. But, when he presented his paragraph, he told my friend and I that his paragraph was a descriptive paragraph. However, when we read his paragraph, it did not like a descriptive paragraph, it had many main idea. And after we asked to him about the paragraph that he had, we knew that he had modified his paragraph so that when we wanted to analyse it, we were very confused. Hem,, yogi was a funny boy with confidence 100%
- The third was Nita. From Nita’s presentation, I could take a conclusion that an Illustration Paragraph gave detail information but it was not clear as like in Descriptive paragraph which was clearer and gave us detail information about the topic.
- the topic sentence from the first sentence. and the topic sentence was not always taken from the hole of the first sentence in the paragraph. We can make it by ourselves, but the contents or the sentence still related to the main idea of the paragraph
Ok.. I think that all from me…
Hopefully we can get
the best from our effort.. :)
Don't be worry aida, we learn from our mistakes.
BalasHapusgood reflective.